Issue Five page 14 9 Comments Oops, you inverted “to” and “do” here (in Michelle’s bubble), and I only see it now that I read the whole comic for the third time. Ahaha, I wonder why I never caught that! Your brain edited it automatically. It has a tendency to do that. I feel you; sometimes I’ll read something I wrote and discover that I THOUGHT about it, but left out a letter, a syllable, or even an entire WORD. And I will have no recollection of how I left it out. Just like to point out, it says that the page features Michael Jocasta, not Michelle. the dragon is way too small. If he was big enough to hold Michelle in one hand (paw?) earlier, why is he so small, now? is it just that he’s a shifter thing like everyone else? SO very polite. Also I ship them now. Don’t judge. I love crack-pairings. I hope she winds up with Greg though. Also….uh. guess the earrings didn’t help. also you misspelled “imprisonment” in michelle’s dialogue… Looks like bloodcarver there is trying his best to avoid sympathizing with Michelle. Of course this could also be to avoid making her freak out and try to escape more when she finds out what he plans on doing with her. Leave a Reply Cancel reply Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked * Name * Email * Website Comment You may use these HTML tags and attributes: <a href="" title=""> <abbr title=""> <acronym title=""> <b> <blockquote cite=""> <cite> <code> <del datetime=""> <em> <i> <q cite=""> <strike> <strong> Notify me of follow-up comments by email. Notify me of new posts by email.